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If anyone has any poetry or just writing you want to share,feel free to post on my blog or give a link to your blog and I will post to you. Kim I would love it if you would share some of your works either on my blog or at my email address. laveniabrewton@yahoo.com

Do You See What I See?

For those of you that are visiting my Blog for the first time, I shared with the class that I write a little poetry. If you like what I have written,send me some"Snaps".


Do you see what I see,when I look at me? Tell me, what do you see? I can see deep inside those pretty brown eyes,all of the things that I try to hide.
What's in those eyes are painful moments, child-hood being taken away,joyful moments of child-bearing and heartaches of losing the ones that are near and dear. Happiness of re placing those empty spots. Thinking that I've gotten away,but it's something about those eyes that see deep inside of what lies beneath.
Wanting to cry like a baby entering the world for the first time and wanting to scream out to let the world know that I'm here,never to be forgotten.Wanting to leave a legacy for the legacies that I've created.But when those brown eyes look into their brown eyes looking deep inside to see a scar that she's left behind.How?When?Why??.
Oh! those clever brown eyes are not hiding as much as one would think.As I open these beautiful brown eyes one more time,tell me do you see what I see when you look at me?.

Comp. Writing 2

Hello everyone. I hope that we all were able to set up a post successfully. I did after three tries. To share a little about myself, I write poetry. Mainly about something that I maybe going through at that time. Hopefully the next time you visit my blog, I will have something for you to read. If you can't pronounce my first name, you can also call me Elaine.